Chapter 13-16
Anne should return to her father and sister, soon after the accident in Lyme she met Mrs. Clay and the rest of the time before the leaving she spent with her closest friend. Luisa got better from day to day. Benwick finished the trip to Uppercross because Anne wasn’t not there. Anne came back to Camden Place. Anne saw her family's new home for the first time, and Mr. Elliot was there too, but his behavior was very strange, he returned to the family again and his visits were very late to their house.
Fair!
ОтветитьУдалитьIt's too short! Make your summaries more detailed!
Slips:
The first sentence has no logic! The first part of it doesn't connect with the other. It sould be TWO sentences.
...Anne wasn’t (NO not) there.
The last sentence is also not logical!
...his visits to their house WERE VERY LATE...very late?
The first part of it ISN'T CONNECTED with the other.
ОтветитьУдалитьЯ не могу писать самари длиннее, потому что они всего по 4 главам! Посмотрите внимательнее!!!! Иначе я буду описывать внешность героев и деревья!
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